Perhaps it would have worked out better if this comic were given to Broken Pencil as a complete piece. Sadly, this one falls short in the “get it together” category, as many pages repeat themselves. Hopefully this is a simple mistake and not an attempt to fuck up the pacing by placing the same page in odd sections. The artwork is fantastic, however, and there are some clever lines in here. I think my favourite character is the typical goth chick, “Viv” who “…goes off like a pack of wild parrots.” Very entertaining, but next time, watch who you get to bind the comics. They need a good slap. (carolyn tripp)
Comic, $7.20, Gilbert, Jaime, and Mario Hernandez, PO Box 40253, Pasadena CA, 91114, [email protected]